Add better benchmark information and minor fixes.

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@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ dimension.
 
 \small
 ONETEP performs transforms in each dimension so each FFT only operates on 50\%
-zeroes instead of 87.5\% of the naïve strategy.
+zeroes instead of the 87.5\% of the naïve strategy.
 
 \vspace{1em}
 
@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ then trasform back to compute the values of the midpoints.
 
 \frame{
 
-\frametitle{Performance Results with FFTW\footnote{Core i7-2600, 3.4GHz, 8MB L2
+\frametitle{Performance Results with FFTW\footnote{Intel Core i7-2600, 3.4GHz, 8MB L2
 cache, FFTW 3.3}}
 
 \footnotesize
@@ -181,11 +181,11 @@ problem sizes due to the factorisations it chooses.
 
 \frame{
 
-\frametitle{Performance Results with FFTW\footnote{Core i7-2600, 3.4GHz, 8MB L2
+\frametitle{Performance Results with FFTW\footnote{Intel Core i7-2600, 3.4GHz, 8MB L2
 cache, FFTW 3.3}}
 
 \footnotesize
-We can filter the results to those which FFTW likes best (products of small
+Filtering the results to those which FFTW likes best (products of small
 primes). Specifically, sizes of the form $2^a3^b5^c7^d11^e13^f$ where $e+f<2$.
 
 \centering
@@ -204,7 +204,7 @@ primes). Specifically, sizes of the form $2^a3^b5^c7^d11^e13^f$ where $e+f<2$.
 \item In our standalone benchmarks, our results give around a 35\% reduction in
   execution time over ONETEP's approach for FFTW's preferred sizes.
 
-\item In practise, we found the actual reduction to be a lot less and overall
+\item In practice, we found the actual reduction to be a lot less and overall
 reduction in execution time to usually be less than 5\%.
 
 \item When doing Fourier interpolation, ONETEP spends a lot of time in its
@@ -247,8 +247,8 @@ possible to pass in data in data in the split format.
 
 \frame{
 
-\frametitle{ONETEP Interpolation Routine Timings\footnote{Core i7-2600, 3.4GHz,
-8MB L2 182 cache, FFTW 3.3}}
+\frametitle{ONETEP Interpolation Routine Timings\footnote{ONETEP 3.3.9.5, Intel
+Core i7-2600, 3.4GHz, 8MB L2 cache, FFTW 3.3}}
 
 \centering
 \resizebox{0.65\textwidth}{!}{
@@ -259,8 +259,8 @@ possible to pass in data in data in the split format.
 
 \frame{
 
-\frametitle{ONETEP Total Execution Time Timings\footnote{Core i7-2600, 3.4GHz,
-8MB L2 182 cache, FFTW 3.3}}
+\frametitle{ONETEP Total Execution Time Timings\footnote{ONETEP 3.3.9.5, Intel
+Core i7-2600, 3.4GHz, 8MB L2 cache, FFTW 3.3}}
 
 \centering
 \resizebox{0.65\textwidth}{!}{